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Sh- Read Aloud Master

Page history last edited by ts19 13 years, 11 months ago

Turnstudent19

Page:201 2nd paragraph

Ian was told a story by an old man named Aduardo who was the hero of Berta. The story was inspirational to Ian so he told Sarge to convince him to stop drinking.

 

This is important because in one short story it changed the life of Sarge and many others.

 

Turnstudent04,
Page 208, last paragraph.

In this scene Mac as handed Ian a Package.  Ian was amazed to here it was from Sarge.  Ian started opening the package realizing it was a present.  After Ian opens the present, he sees a aword.  It's not just any aword Sarge had gave him.  It was an aword that you would get when you had been in the treatment center for at leaste two weeks trying to stop your drinking problem. 

 

I chose this page because it made me happy when I read it.  This page made me happy because Sarge has been trying to sto his drinking problem so he can have a better life.  I think Sarge would have a better life because he wouldn't have to pay for the alcohal and he could buy more impotant things like a home if he saved up.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Turnstudent04,

Page 105 paragraph: last

On this page Ian found the answere to Sarge's question.

 

I find this page important because I think Sarge is going to be very important to this book and you will only hear what happened once.   I think Sarge would have been working in Rwanda as a peace keeper after I read this part because Sarge wanted Ian to know what happened in Rwanda and what he found was there was a war and they needed to have peace keepers.

 

Turnstudent19

Page: 99 Paragraph: Last

While Ian is Interviewing Sarge everything goes wronge after Ian doesn't know about the traggity that happened in Rawanda as a result Sarge left the Club. I think the author made "Sarge" leave mostly to keep the reader reading, and he wants us to stay interesting. This is good because then there is more action.

 

Turnstudent 30:  Page: 24-25  Paragraph: Very last 

Mac lets in the homeless men giving them pats on the back and hugs. This shows how much Mac cares about the homeless people. He takes them in as family, and treats them as guests. Usually when you have family and friends over you give them a pat on the back and/or a hug. By Mac giving the homeless men hugs and pats on the back, it seems that he makes it so they believe they are "home". He makes them believe that they have family somewhere.

 

Turnstudent14:  pg. 32 paragraph 1 

One Sentence Summary: Ian is now more relaxed about the idea of running out of stew because he now knows where Mac keeps the baseball bat after he threatens two of the arguing homeless men with it. 

Significance: I find the last sentence quite funny and a bit interesting. Ian is basically saying that the people who eat at "The Club" is so threatening to him that he would hit them with a wooden baseball bat if they ever decided to start a riot. In my opinion, if you don't feel safe in your working environment unless you know where the nearest weapon is, it probably isn't worth working there, volunteer or paying. 

 

Turnstudent04, All of page 19. 

This Passage describes what homeless people look like going into the soup kitchen.

I chose this passage because it makes me feel bad knowing that there are lot's of homeless people in one town and it doesn't seem like the government is trying to help.  I also chose this part because it alows you to visualize all the homeless people in a big line there is hardly anybody on the strees. 

 

Turnstudent49: All of page 12

One sentence summary: When the homeless guy was standing up for Ian.  Please write this as a complete sentence; this is a fragment. 

I chose this passage because there are alot of people that walk around at night; and they are gangs, so they try to beat people up, or steal things from them, and this passage just makes me mad about how the 3 guys were trying to steal Ian's money, coat, and shoes, and Ian was gonna let them have them. Until the homeless guy that followed him threw the park without Ian knowing , he was watching out for Ian, and it's kind of funny how the 3 people were scared, and got hurt because now they know how it feels to get your belongings tooken away.

Comments (20)

ts49 said

at 12:55 pm on May 21, 2010

Page: 210
Paragraph: Whole page.

When Mac had said "I couldn't have done it by myself" This is a thoughtful ending because it was very nice of Mac to have said that to Ian, because it would've made Ian be really happy, about his civics class.
In my own opininon, I think Ian would've passed his civics class because earlier in the book it had said "you really think washing dishes is my dream job?", I think Ian got used to the soup kitchen, and feeding homeless people everyday. Being helpful and working at a place that you didn't even know what it was, could turn out as a really good job, just like what happend to Ian. I would like to know if Ian kept working there, or if we was just doing it for his school community hours.

ts30 said

at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2010

Book club 6

Page 189
Paragraph 16

In this passage, Berta has taken Ian to a Spanish church service. She has asked him to talk to Eduardo, the spanish priest. Ian askes Berta why she wants him to go, that it won't make a difference on the story of Berta's life. Berta tells him, "little things make big differences sometimes..." I think this passage is important because it describes the life of the homeless. In their lives, a little means alot. Little bits of food keep them full for a day. Little bits of change (money) makes them smile.

ts14 said

at 10:38 pm on May 19, 2010

Book Club #6

pg: 182

One Sentence Summary: Jack and Ian argue after Ian attempts to convince Jack to give up drinking.

Significance: This passage is significant because it finally explains why Eric Walters named this book "Shattered". Jack compared the shattered glass shards of a broken wine bottle to his life. By that, he means that he can try as hard as he can, but he will never be able to live the way he did before he served in Rwanda, similar to how one could try and try to put pieces of a broken bottle back together, but it will never be the same as it was before it was broken. Even though the memories Jack has from Rwanda, I think Ian did the right thing by trying to get him to go sober.

ts49 said

at 8:27 am on May 14, 2010

Turnstudent49,
Page: 99
whole page.

I think this page is interesting because when Sarge left the club after Ian asked a simple question, I wanted to keep reading the book, too see why Sarge left angrily. Sarge left because he was dissapointed that Ian didn't know about Rwanda, because Sarge has a whole story about himself from when he was in Rwanda.

ts04 said

at 11:31 am on May 13, 2010

Page 152 paragraph 1,
This page shows how much Ian respects homless people and that he is getting attached to them.

I find this important because Ian really cares about homeless people now thanks to Sarge.

ts30 said

at 11:06 am on May 13, 2010

Week 5
Page: 146
Paragraph: 15

In this passage, Sarge is walking Ian to the soup kitchen. Sarge tells Ian that, "you just can't get anywhere without working hard." He says this because I says that he doesn't work hard for his grades. That he doesn't get very many good grades at all. I think this passage is important because it shows that Sarge once had an education. Sarge knows that you have to have to work hard. He also knows, from being homeless, that you can't get away without working hard.

ts14 said

at 11:05 am on May 13, 2010

Book Club #5

pg. 155 paragraph 10

One Sentence Summary: Mac tells Ian that he used to be homeless and explains why he quit being a drunk.

Significance: This passage is significant because it is a big twist in the book. I would've never guessed that Mac was once homeless, although it does make sense. Mac, or anyone else for that matter, probably wouldn't care about homeless people and what they go through unless they themselves have experienced it. It also explains why Mac is so likeable amungst other homeless in the area because at one point, he was one of them, making him trust-worthy.

ts04 said

at 11:02 pm on May 6, 2010

Page: 109
Whole Page:

Ian is skipping school to talk to Sarge. I find this signifigant because I dont think Ian is really missing school to talk to Sarge for the interview I think he is just curious about what happened to Sarge. I think Ian really looks up to Sarge and he is kind of like Ian's roll model.

ts30 said

at 12:41 pm on May 6, 2010

Book Club# 4

Page: 116
Paragraph: 1

In this passage, Ian is in the red tent area that Sarge lives in. Sarge invites him to have a seat by the camp fire with him. Ian sits on a lawn chair across from Sarge. The seat of the chair sinks from his body weight. I believe that this passage is important because it shows how much less body weight the homeless have. Ian is strong and healthy, and the chair sinks from his body weight. The chair may not be used to that much weight, and that is why it sunk.

ts19 said

at 12:39 pm on May 6, 2010

Page: 119
Paragraph: 4
Sarge is shaking like a wet dog pleading for a smoke from Ian, and luckly even though Ian doesn't smoke he pulls out a pack and gives it to Sarge who then tries to light it. When Sarge is struggleing to light his smoke it gives a really detailed description on how he struggles to light it. I think this is a greatly descripted passage because it really shows how Sarge is feeling and what his condition is like. I also think that Ian will catch on to this later and help Sarge out.

ts14 said

at 12:38 pm on May 6, 2010

Book Club #4

pg. 139-141

One Sentence Summary: Jacob, an 11 year old boy and a witness to the Rwandian genocide, tells hs story.

This passage is significant because it is just the kind of story needed so that he could have an idea of what it must have felt like to have witnessed the genocides in Rwanda. Ian wanted to try to know something about somebody who was there during the killing, and he sure found that in Jacob's story. I wonder how Ian will react once hehas finished reading the story? My guess would be that he iis pretty traumatized.

ts04 said

at 10:27 pm on Apr 29, 2010

This is actually ts49 log in won't work again.

Page: 96
Paragraph: 2

It's important that Sarge told Ian to go to the military and get the training.

I chose this passage because if Ian ever gets stopped on the street because of some tough guys. Ian will know how to defend himself because he got the training from the military. But I don't think Ian is going to join the military just for the training.

ts14 said

at 12:50 pm on Apr 29, 2010

Book Club #3: pg. 98 paragraph 3

One Sentence Summary: Sarge explains to Ian that as a soldier/peacekeeper, you shouldn't ever expect to be thanked for your duties.

Significance: This is significant because it is a very true statement. The sacrifices made every day be these men and women overseas is tremendous. Unforetunately, in today's society, their sacrifices are often taken for granted and we do not show enough gratitude. Who knows what kind of chaotic frenzy we would be in without their bravery and courage?

ts30 said

at 12:36 pm on Apr 28, 2010

Read-Aloud 3

Page- 94
Paragraph- 9

In this passage, Ian is helping three ladies who volenteered, give homeless their food. He had just finished talking to Sarge about asking him questions for a school report. Sarge said he would answer some questions and was waiting for Ian to finish up. Ian wanted to run straight over to Sarge, but wanted also to finish bringing the line back up to speed.
This passage is important because it shows that Ian is begining to like being at the soup kitchen. He wants to run off and talk to Sarge, but he doesn't. He stays and makes sure that the line-up for food had died down a bit before letting the the volenteers take over.

ts04 said

at 1:37 pm on Apr 26, 2010

Page: 66
Paragraph: 1

It's important when Mac asked the homeless guy if he needs a place to sleep tonight.
This passage is significant because Mac didn't want the homeless guy to freeze and die, and he was just trying to start a conversation so they would get Mac's attention for Mac giving them a flyer to go to the "The Club".

Heather Durnin said

at 10:23 am on Apr 24, 2010

Excellent comments. I can see this book is opening up a whole new world to you. Some of it is really ugly as TS19 said in his pg. 64 passage, and as TS04 said when you all realized that Mac is really a great guy.

ts14 said

at 12:09 pm on Apr 23, 2010

Book Club #2:

pg 68 paragraph 8

One Sentence Summary: Mac explains to Ian how he is dealing with grown men and not kids.

This is significant because it opens Ian's eyes about these guys who live on the street don't have some place to run home to like some of the kids that runaway. They have to make do with what they have around them and try there best to survive the harsh winters. Kids on the other hand can just go home.

ts04 said

at 12:46 pm on Apr 22, 2010

Page: 51
Paragraph: 10 and 11

Mac acting seriouse but he was joking about Ian thinking he knew everything.

I chose this passage because last book club we were all thinking that Mac was all mean and didn't like Ian; Now Mac is really nice and always joking around and really nice to Ian. I think Mac is actualy a really nice guy since he got to know Ian.

ts19 said

at 12:40 pm on Apr 22, 2010

Page 64
Paragraph 7
The signifcance of this part is weirder than normal because I think it's significant because it made me think. That part was when Mac had said that when a bum dies it doesn't make the front page but others do. This really stuck to me because it's true and it's not fair. This made me emotional and I don't usually get that way.

ts30 said

at 3:41 pm on Apr 21, 2010

Page: 37
Paragraph: 6-8

Ian is doing the dishes at the soup kitchen. Mac tells him that he works seven days a week and lives in the soup kitchen while pointing to a bed in a corner.
This passage is small, but significant. It shows how much Mac cares about the homeless. Since he works seven days a week, he is keeping all the homeless people fed without a vacation. Being that he lives there as well means that he is ready to work. He wants to make sure that he is there when it is time for super. Living in the soup kitchen also makes it so that Mac can cook the food at the soup kitchen early to be ready, while doing his house work that he needs to do.

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